bottan: (SyaoSaku)
Rieke ([personal profile] bottan) wrote in [community profile] kurofai 2012-05-05 09:20 pm (UTC)

Beautiful work! :DDDD

1. 10 - this was some excellent world building! absolutely beautiful setting! ♥
2. 8 - I do have to admit that towards the beginning, I felt that the characters fell a bit flat, but I loved to see how they got more fleshed out towards the end.
3. 8 - I really, really enjoyed the tales, and especially the moment all the parts came together! The end of this was fantastic!

I meant to say that I really appreciate to see fic by you in the olympics! I've always liked your writing, I'd love to see more by you! :DDDD

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