I've got to confess that I love AUs. They're always my favourite stories because you can put the characters in completely different settings and it still works! That said, I loved this story and the universe you created, it was all so well thought and original. The princess of the moon and the princess of the sun bit was just so cool (poor Sakura, Kurogane scolds her for being too formal xD), the tales of the gods and Fai's and Yuui's story were beautiful, really great!! And Ashura was a good guy in this fic!!! Yay!!!
I like how Fai fell from the sky, it just seems a perfect way for him to appear, and by the end, how he became a human and was finally able to heal his wounds. Oh Fai, why are you so tragic?? ;_;

1. How well did this fic fulfill the prompt? 10
2. How In-Character was this fic? 9
3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 9