http://shadow-of-egypt.livejournal.com/ (shadow-of-egypt.livejournal.com) wrote in kurofai2012-05-03 10:18 pm (UTC)
Beautiful world, beautiful descriptions - there is nothing I did not love about this. I think you hit all my narrative-kink buttons for TRC numerous times; lovely use of Fai's magic - his solution came right about the point in the text when I was wondering why he wasn't using it (and I'd kill to see the light-tattoos he created), and the misunderstanding about everything between Kurogane and Fai felt very them.
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Really, truly and completely loved this. ♥
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