Loved it. 1 - 10 the stroy matcehs the promt exactly. I don't know about others, but before reading I tried to think of a fic I'd write, and yours sort of blew my stupid idea back to the stone age where it belongs. 2 - 10 I don't think I've read a story like this before. of course 'like this' is very bague, but i think the feeling you get when reading is unique in its own way, and while their behaviour is very familiar, I think this is because you portraiyed them so well. of course they're familiar, they're kurofai! 3 - 10 well, i read it and then i read it again and then i just sort of nibbled at bits. if i didn't have work to do, i'd probably still be nibbling on it. I actually re-read some parts just before posting. :)
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1 - 10 the stroy matcehs the promt exactly. I don't know about others, but before reading I tried to think of a fic I'd write, and yours sort of blew my stupid idea back to the stone age where it belongs.
2 - 10 I don't think I've read a story like this before. of course 'like this' is very bague, but i think the feeling you get when reading is unique in its own way, and while their behaviour is very familiar, I think this is because you portraiyed them so well. of course they're familiar, they're kurofai!
3 - 10 well, i read it and then i read it again and then i just sort of nibbled at bits. if i didn't have work to do, i'd probably still be nibbling on it. I actually re-read some parts just before posting. :)