This is just, wow! The first chapter was amazing, so hunting! And this one continued it perfectly. It's such a dark setting, and you write it so well! You create such an atmosphere during the whole thing, I almost felt like I was there.
I love how you write Kurogane and Fai, especially Fai, he's just so intriguing. And I'm curious to know more about Erebus. Well, I'm curious to know more about this whole story, really!
I'm so looking forward to more of this, it's just great! Keep up the good work! ^^