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[Team God] (Backpfeifengesich) Face God
Title:
Prompt:Backpfeifengesich: A face badly in need of a fist
Rating: T for Teen
Tags: Fae & Fairies, Alternate Universe - Fae, fae!Fai, Canon-Typical Violence, Pre-Relationship, mentions of plague, Dragons, playing fast and loose with fairy myths, SFN (safe for newbies/Nick), KuroFai Olympics, Team Gods
Any author’s notes
Back on my bullshit. Don't worry about how last minute this is. It's still Sept 2nd somewhere.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/15880413
~the end.
Thank you for reading! How did I do?
Please score my fic according to these guidelines:
1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
3. How well did this fic fit their team’s theme? (1-10)
4. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
5. Was the fic tagged correctly (Yes or No)
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(Anonymous) 2018-09-04 03:01 am (UTC)(link)1. 10
2. 9
3. 8
4. 10
5. 10
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(Anonymous) 2018-09-04 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)2. 10
3. 9
4. 10
5. 10
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(Anonymous) 2018-09-05 02:31 am (UTC)(link)2. 10
3. 10
4. 10
5. 10 (just kidding. Yes)
https://unfriendlyreminders.tumblr.com/
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(Anonymous) 2018-09-06 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)2. 10
3. 10
4. 10
5. Yup.
Thank you :)
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Great Work
It was a bit difficult to get a handle on Fai's character as it was largely Kurogane's POV. I think Fai just needed to be fleshed out a bit more. (Granted mystery was kind of his thing.)
2. 8
You did a pretty god job. You certainly had Kurogane wanting to smack Fai in the beginning and the ending certainly fit. Overall though, the prompt kind of fell into the background.
3. 8
While Gods and the idea of Gods was thrown in, I felt the it could have been stressed more. It seemed largely glossed over bar specific mentions here and there.
4. 9
I enjoyed the story. It made me laugh a few times. The pace of the story seemed rushed though (somewhat expected given this competition).
5. Yes
Overall, very nice job. I would certainly read a continuation of this.
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(Anonymous) 2018-09-23 12:28 am (UTC)(link)8
9
9
Yes
I really enjoyed this! The descriptions were rich and there was alot of action. I do feel like it was a little bit rushed at the end though, but
that could've been me wanting to read about Kurogane threatening to smite Fai with his demi-god powers lol
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2.8
3.10
4. 10 - I want more of them!!!
5. Yes
https://www.tumblr.com/blog/thetravellinghobbit
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2. 8
3. 8
4. 8
5. Yes
I think you nailed the characters pretty well though Fai could have been explored a bit more. Also pretty solid reference to the prompt, I enjoyed how Kurogane was just itching to punch someone in the face the whole time. The theme was also handled appropriately too.
I did enjoy your fic, your world building was great! I was getting really into it all but then I felt the ending was very abrupt and sudden. I can understand during a competition that thats how things might end up. I also feel like the actual relationship between Kuro and Fai needed to be developed more- I love the interactions you have between then so far but I wish we could of seem more sparks between them.
If you were ever to write more- which I really hope you do because this fic with its great world already laid out and the potential for a great relationship foundations already set into motion- I would absolutely love to read more!