I'm not sure what the heck happened but somehow my first post got deleted. Hopefully this repost is still within the time limit.
How well did this fic fit the prompt? 9.5
You came up with a completely unique view on the prompt that worked on multiple levels. Kurogane and Fai only reacting at night, Kurogane being a unique type of 'life', and how the dawn breaks at the end finally bringing Kurogane's everlasting night to an end. It was both incredibly clever and beautifully symbolic.
How well written was the fic? 9.5
You did a stunning job. Everything, even the time skips, flowed well. Your writing was beautifully descriptive and I really felt kinship with the characters. The only thing I was a bit confused with is how you seemed to stress the 'incident' with Fai and Yuui at the beginning but never really gave it more significance (other than the beast). Perhaps it is a side story, or was intentionally left as a slight mention to make the story flow better, but I would have liked to know a bit more about Yuui's death and the dimensional rift.
How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 9
I love how clever your writing is. Fai trapping Kurogane in the maze was probably one of my favorite parts (aside from the very symbolic ending). I loved how you were able to bring forth so much of Kurogane's past in sometimes rather subtle manners but still be able to tell the reader so much. As I mentioned in the last section, I would certainly like to know a bit more so will happily welcome additional writings. Even simply adding an epilogue, though I don't want to ruin your wonderful ending. I would love to know what comes of their relationship now that Kurogane has new life, what was actually tugged from Fai, and where the heck Kyle's soul went...if you are up for it.
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How well did this fic fit the prompt? 9.5
You came up with a completely unique view on the prompt that worked on multiple levels. Kurogane and Fai only reacting at night, Kurogane being a unique type of 'life', and how the dawn breaks at the end finally bringing Kurogane's everlasting night to an end. It was both incredibly clever and beautifully symbolic.
How well written was the fic? 9.5
You did a stunning job. Everything, even the time skips, flowed well. Your writing was beautifully descriptive and I really felt kinship with the characters. The only thing I was a bit confused with is how you seemed to stress the 'incident' with Fai and Yuui at the beginning but never really gave it more significance (other than the beast). Perhaps it is a side story, or was intentionally left as a slight mention to make the story flow better, but I would have liked to know a bit more about Yuui's death and the dimensional rift.
How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 9
I love how clever your writing is. Fai trapping Kurogane in the maze was probably one of my favorite parts (aside from the very symbolic ending). I loved how you were able to bring forth so much of Kurogane's past in sometimes rather subtle manners but still be able to tell the reader so much. As I mentioned in the last section, I would certainly like to know a bit more so will happily welcome additional writings. Even simply adding an epilogue, though I don't want to ruin your wonderful ending. I would love to know what comes of their relationship now that Kurogane has new life, what was actually tugged from Fai, and where the heck Kyle's soul went...if you are up for it.