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thecicada ([personal profile] thecicada) wrote in [community profile] kurofai2016-08-11 10:30 pm

[TEAM DARK] (Fantastic Beasts) Beacons


Title: Beacons
Prompt: Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them
Rating: T
Warnings: Major character death/death as a major theme; Suggestions of animal abuse

More author's notes inside, but thank you to everyone who has made this event possible by organising, participating, or scoring! It's awesome to see the Olympics living on. Thank you to my coach the-smallest-kurapika for all your help! GOOD JOB GUYS let's read some fic.

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1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
9 - Kurogane's unyielding character shines through and through! Fai's presence in the fic, on the other hand, didn't allow as much appreciation to his character as Kurogane's screentime did.

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
8 - The prompt was handled well in the beginning, but it sort of faded out as the story progressed.

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
9 - The angst was nicely served! The fic's rushed ending actually seems like it's resonating with the lurching feeling of time running out and not knowing when time will run out, and it made everything hurt just a bit more.