kurofai | (Team Fantasy) [Nightlife] Patterns (NOW FINISHED)

Title: Patterns
Prompt: Nightlife
Rating: T
Warnings: Violence; Gore; some body horror; Major Character Death (sort of?), Canon Character Death
Notes: (Somebody might be dead but they're still around; not a zombie fic, posting chapter one just to get it up there before deadline, should have it up fully shortly)
I started this two and a half days ago, after realizing that I'd written 9k words for my original idea and probably needed another 15k words to wrap it all up. No way that would happen in time. So I latched onto a far shorter idea and managed to grind the majority of it out in time.
Thanks for reading. :x

NOW COMPLETE

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1. How well did this fic fit the prompt? 10/10
When I think about nightlife in general, my mind flows to inns, travels maybe, but I couldn't think at all about a fucking ghost. It's such an original idea and perfect for the prompt, it's obvius that a ghost must have a nightlife, no? <3

2. How well written was the fic? 9/10
With no mistakes at all, your style is simple but quite enjoyable in my opinion. Your fic flows smooth and "funny" ( expecially with the dialogue about the chair and the wall. God, THAT was funny man! ), i really like it.

3. How much did I enjoy this fic overall? 9/10
I was really sad when I discovered that this is not the complete fic. Really, I enjoyed it so much and I'm so curious about the thing into Fay's eye and what's happened with Yuui ASDFGHJKL and, as I said before, the dialogues between Fay and Kuro-ghost were... amazing, I love how you painted Kurogane, he was such a cute dork nnnh-

Oh gosh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it even though it's still partial!

I will have the rest up either tonight or at the latest tomorrow (I desperately needed sleep, ahaha...), so do feel free to edit your vote if the rest of my writing ends up gravely disappointing you once it's up! ('gravely', haha, get it??)

(Team Fantasy) [Nightlife] Patterns (NOW FINISHED)

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